Water Park

Hey everyone, Today I will be telling you about my water park writing. Here are the things we needed to do:

1. Make sure you are using present tense,

2. Use your five senses. ( feel, taste, hear, see and smell)

3. Make sure you put in paragraphs.

Here is my story, I hope you like it.

I can smell the hot dogs as I am walking through the water park and I can see the pink water slide. I can hear children stomping their feet all around the place and I can taste vanilla ice cream and this. movie and .  

I can feel the ground is hot on my feet and it was burning my feet. The water slide looks so  cool so I want to have a try. I have a try and it is fun to make all the water slides.

As I was having a picnic with my mum and we have pancakes with maple syrup and it taste like a dream come true and after my tummy got risk I win on a water slide what's the water Blooms what you want to do and I went down the waterslide and I screams and I went on a next water slide and it is so fun after that's life I win on another one and it was fun too bet I went in the pool and it is deep and i am go to get frozen drink and the drink is so good .