water park writing

 Hi last week we made are writing about the waterpark and my teacher was proud of me and i was to and i was the first one to be finished and clear was proud of me to and my and my friends was to and i was very very happy of myself.

Water Park

Hey everyone, Today I will be telling you about my water park writing. Here are the things we needed to do:

1. Make sure you are using present tense,

2. Use your five senses. ( feel, taste, hear, see and smell)

3. Make sure you put in paragraphs.

Here is my story, I hope you like it.

I can smell the hot dogs as I am walking through the water park and I can see the pink water slide. I can hear children stomping their feet all around the place and I can taste vanilla ice cream and this. movie and .  

I can feel the ground is hot on my feet and it was burning my feet. The water slide looks so  cool so I want to have a try. I have a try and it is fun to make all the water slides.

As I was having a picnic with my mum and we have pancakes with maple syrup and it taste like a dream come true and after my tummy got risk I win on a water slide what's the water Blooms what you want to do and I went down the waterslide and I screams and I went on a next water slide and it is so fun after that's life I win on another one and it was fun too bet I went in the pool and it is deep and i am go to get frozen drink and the drink is so good .

Cloze

 Hello and welcome to my amazing blog. We have been doing cloze last term and this term.

 I would like to show you one of my cloze from last term. There is a story with empty boxes and we have to fill them in with the words that are on the side. Here is my work  I have done.

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Cross Country

 Hi today I am blogging about Cross Country. We went to Halswell Quarry for the zones race. It was a long cross-country race and I fell over and I just kept on going. I came 27th place. I came back to school with Love and Alysha and Miss Scott said we can go inside and relax. Thank you for listening to me, bye.

How to make a hot chocolate

 

How to make a hot chocolate

You will need

cup 

teaspoon 

milk 

hot chocolate powder 

marshmallows                                            

Jug

Water

Steps

1. Boil the Jug

2. Put two teaspoons of hot chocolate powder in the cup 

3. Put in a hot water in the cup to half way

4. Stir it

5. Put enough milk in  the cup to nearly fill it to the top

6. Stir it again

7. Put the two marshmallows on the top

8. Drink and enjoy.

Holiday

Hi bloggers. On my holidays I went to my auntie mara's and we went to drop off Rj and Aprill, my cousins, and then we went to my School, Hornby Primary School, and played on the playground. 

After we went home and then we went and my mum's home to get Khyran's suitcase. Me, Khyran, Aprill and Rj went to sleep. Then I went to my mum's home and then we went to go see dad. We had chicken nuggets for dinner. Then and we went to go to sleep and then when I woke up the next morning it was School. 

Thank you for reading my blog.  Bye

Easter

Hi. On Easter I was at my auntie's house and I got Easter eggs and we got one big Easter egg and some small ones. We had a fun easter egg hunt and I got heaps of chocalate but I didnt share with my brother. After we went to my aunties house, we went back home tired. After my sister drove me home I was tired but I had to wait in my room with my brother. And then we got to wait for Mum to go home and then we got to go out of the bedroom and we got to find the Easter eggs and I found most of them.